4.21.2012

Act One A.


I know I said I'd wait until I finished act one before sharing any of my script, but I decided that posting might help me stop nitpicking.  At least during this first draft.  Nitpicking—or editing at all, really—should be second draft behavior.

I'm sure there are typos, clunky descriptions, and heinous dialogue, but it's the first draft and I'm trying to let all of that go.  Besides, script writing is just for fun.  No point in getting worked up about it.

A few notes for script newbies:

INT signifies an interior (inside) scene.
EXT signifies an exterior (outside) scene.
O.S. means that a character is speaking off screen.  That doesn't necessarily imply that the character is not in the room/set.  Just that they're not in the (camera) shot.

I think everything else is probably self-explanatory.  If not, let me know.

Now, onto the script.

Act One A


am almost finished with the full act and hopefully I'll post the rest of it tomorrow.


2 comments:

Cindy said...

wow--great flow and I pictured everything. So detailed. Well done. Looking forward to more.

Jill Kinchen said...

Thanks.